It is really important to wear shoes outside. It keeps your feet safe and clean. If your shoes are on you can't cut your foot. You shod wear shoes because you don't want to step on something yucky like dog poo or mud.
I was learning to write an explanation. I know to use my ideas from the plan. it was easy to think of ideas about each topic.
I like how you used lots of the ideas from your plan to write this story. Tino pai!
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