Mystery letter

                                                                                                                          91 Banana Road                                                                                                                                        Fruit  Valley

                                                                                                                          0000

Dear Mum and Dad,                                                                                                                                                               

I can hear people whispering and cutting paper.  I can see a comfy couch and a 

shiny TV. I can smell the cold milk.  I can feel the bumpy carpet under my feet. I can

smell fresh air around me. I can see heaps of bags. I can see peoples computers and i see a

very shiny whiteboard. I can taste cold milk.

Where am I ?

From,
Larissa

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Reflection:
We Have been learning to describe setting by using our senses.
I enjoyed writing about a Mystery Place.
Something I found tricky to find words for touch.
Next time I will start my sentences differently.